Thursday, June 10, 2010

Alphabet Essay


Aardvark, this is an animal that is like a rat he is big and can have babies, he is ugly and gray. He has an ears really big and mouth like a pig.

Bengal Tigers, these animals are so cute but so dangerous, they eat others animals and they can have babies. They are yellow with black stripes, I like those animals but they can eat me in a second.

Camels, these animals are inoffensive they can transport people over the world they are big and they have two big balls in their back. They are like dark brown and black.

Dolphins, these animals are cute and they are inoffensive too, they live in the sea they are like a fish. These animals are very smart they can be smarter than a dog, they are like gray too, and they can have babies too.

Elephants, these animals are really big they are strong animals sometimes they are inoffensive if you don’t do nothing to them, because if you do something they can kill you because in those moments they can be a killers, these animals are gray and they can have babies too.

Flamingo, these animals I really don’t know them too much but I know that they are cute they are a little bit big and they are white with like red. These animals sometimes are in the water and in the sand but mostly in the grass.

Giraffes, these animals are too big their neck are really big I like these animals because they are lovely and you can play with them I have seen these animals in the zoo and I don’t know where they come from. These animals have circles brown with lines like white these animals are so cool I like them.

Hippopotamus, these animals are big and have a big head, they are kind of cute but worst at the same time, they live in the water, they can have babies and they have a big mouth they can opened really big. They are gray with pink.

Iguanas, they are really small you can put them in your hand, they are cute and they are inoffensive. They eat vegetables and fruits. Long time ago I had one but she died. Well they are green and they have too many colors in their body.

Jaguars, these animals are big and dangerous. They eat others animals and they can have babies. They have spots around their body and they are black with white. They are cute but you can’t trust in them.

Kangaroos, these animals are big and cute; they have a long tale and big feet, and the weird thing is that they have like a bag in their stomach and their babies can stay there. These animals are brown.

Lion, these is my favorite animal in the world they are cute but they are dangerous they can have babies well just the female lions. These animals are big and they eat others animals, these animals are kind of yellow or brown.

Marmoset, (albino pygmy) these animals are weird are like to small like a finger they are cute but weird at the same time. These animals have like the hair white and the other parts are black with pink.

Newt, these animal is really grows is like an iguana but a little different like different colors, this animal is like orange and like brown.

Orangutan, these animals are big they have a lot of hair in their body and they are inoffensive they live in the forest they are always jumping around everywhere and they mostly are in the trees they are a little bit like the humans they have hands and everything they can do a lot of things. And they are like brown and light brown.

Penguins, these animals live in the southern hemisphere they are always in the water and they eat fish they are not that tall. They have their babies in eggs. They are like black and white these animals are offensive.

Quail, these animal are small they are like bird or something like that they eat insects and similar small prey, they are rapid and flight. They are like orange, brown, black, and yellow.

Rhino, these animals are big and they can be dangerous in some times, like when you are bugging them they can kill you with their big horns in their head, they are gray.

Somali, these animals are like the Zebras but they have stripes in the legs they run fast and they are cute.

Tree frog these frogs are really small, they are green and have big eyes.

Uakari, they are a very short monkey with a very short tale, red face and bald head. It generally weighs less than 9 pounds. Each of which is considered vulnerable to extinction.

Vulture, these animals are ugly and they are always there when you died, to eat you these animals are weird when you are going to died they fly in circles and wait until you died to eat you these are very scary animals. They are black with white and pink in the head.

White tiger these animals are very dangerous, like their name they are white with black stripes, they carry their babies in the mouth but they eat them when they are hungry.

Xenoglaux this animals are very quit, they have big eyes they are scary they can spin their head all around its scary.

Yariguies brush-finch these animals are like a bird they are cute they live in the trees this animals are cute and they are like black with yellow and orange.





Zebra these animals are like horses they run fast and they are the food for the lions and all that stuff they can be very good animals and very cute too they are white with black stripes or black with white stripes I think nobody knows that.

Wednesday, June 9, 2010

My New Identity

If I have the opportunity to make a new life in this world my name would be Catalina Contreras and I would live in Paris I would be a really good person with everybody, I would like to have too much money to give money to the people that need some. I would be a really cute person with too much clothes and I would finish all my school and get a really good, good job in Paris I would be a very busy person like always going out of the city visiting too many cities and be good in everything.

I’m going to be a girl that always is going to be happy she always going to be a person that everybody can trust her and they can go talk to her without worry if Is she going to hear me? Or does she have a time for me? I want to be a girl that always is going to be there for her friends and do good thing for other people. I’m going to be a tall person, lovely, responsible, not lazy, with energy, and all that stuff. I’m a get married with a man that loves me and I love him too, who respect me at every second, and treat me good like a person.

When I change my life I want to be good with everyone I want to be someone important in this life who everybody respect for who she is, not just because she said so, I want to have respect from the others for the things I have done, for the things that I do for others in this planet or for the things that I do for my people. Because in this planet or in my city the people that do great things for other are respected they are not just one person in here.

In my new life I want to be famous because I want to learn how to draw a really good pictures I want to be famous in that way and when I have my children I want them to be really good in something in whatever they want but I want them to be good in something I don’t want them to be nothing in this world because everybody is something but they have to look for what they are because nobody in this world is sent to nothing everybody have to help on something and that’s why this world is how it is because too much people is in the streets doing nothing because they don’t look for what they are. So I want them to be something really good like they mother.

In this world I want to change something like how is the world in this moments to help this planet because if nobody take care of this planet this planet is going to end bad or just is going to explode because the humans just came to do nothing in here we are just hurting the earth and I think someone needs to do something and if I have the opportunity to change this planet I’ll do it because I want something good to my sons and the sons of my sons I want them to live good or just to live a better live in here. I want for them a clean planet so they can live a better life without doing things to help the planet. And anyways the people always are going to have to do at least little things to help this planet because without our help this is going to end.

So that’s how I want to be if I have the opportunity to change my life instantly and I’m thinking that I can change it by my own because if I do things to do what I want to do I think I can change a little bit in this planet and if we all the people say the same thing that they want to change this planet or themselves I think we can do it because the only thing that I want to change is the planet I care too much about the animal and that’s what I want to do in here. And I want to found out what I’m here for so that’s what I’m going to do look for what I’m here, and always try to be a better person.

Commas


Fisrt time I did it:

1st:   88%
2nd:  94%
3rd:  100%

Tuesday, June 8, 2010

My Love Murder Mystery

Like 3 hundred years ago there was a girl that she always was dreaming with the day that one guy went to her house and rescue her from her big stepmother, the girls was a really cute girl but she thought she was ugly because the mother always tell her that she was ugly and all that stuff. The girl had a diary where she always put her thoughts and what happened to her she always was in her room, because the mother doesn’t let her go out and nothing.


One day in the morning she found a flower in her room and she ask herself “where does this flower come from”, she was al confused because nobody couldn’t went throw the house and enter to live a flower in her room, after that she hide the flower where the mother couldn’t find it. Then the mother yelled at her and said “Carolina what do you think if you don’t come down in 1 minute you don’t eat in a week”!!! And then Carolina said “yes mom I’m going” then she went down stairs and sat down to eat. Then when she finished, she return to her room, after she wash the dishes. She was all confused because the flower. Then the next day happened the same thing and after a week she had 7 flowers in her room. She didn’t know who was it but she want it to know then that day she didn’t sleep and in the middle of the night she heard something in her room then she get up then everything disappear.

That day in the city of Yopomera was a dance in the night of that Saturday then Carolina want it to go but her mother doesn’t let her go because in the dance will be the prince of the city and the mother want the prince for her because the daughter of her husband was the only girl that she had because her dad died when she was little then the mother couldn’t have more babies. Then Carolina tell her mother that if she can go to the dance but the mother said “Yes if you finish to clean my room every little centimeter of my room has to be clean and you room and all the house, then if you finish you can go” then the girl said “but mom I’m not going to finish”, Then her mom said “well I’m sorry for you”.

Then after that time She finish to clean her house then she went to the dance at that time it was 11:00 when the prince came out then the girl was at the door of the castle then he saw her and went straight to her everybody was looking at them then the mother saw her and run to her and told her we have to go… then she said “but…” and the mother said “but nothing”.

After that day Carolina was all happy because she saw the prince, but her mother was all mad because he went throw her stepdaughter she was all mad at her and she didn’t let her go out and nothing.

Then one night in the room of the girl went a white bird and let the flower in her room and she said”no wait who are you? Who sent you?” and then the white bird said” oh quack I can’t tell you who sent me quack because you don’t suppose to see me” and the girl said “Oh my god you can talk” then the white bird said “Well yes I can but promises me that you aren’t going to tell anyone” then Carolina said “Yes I promise you, but please tell me who sent you” then the white bird said”Ok I’m going to tell you. It was the prince” then she told the white bird “The prince? He doesn’t even know where I live” then the white bird said “Well that’s what you think”.

Then the next day the prince was looking for the little girl, He went to her house bit her mother tell him that she wasn’t there then the girl went down stair and saw the prince then the prince went to h” then they left and live the stepmother in the house and everybody live and the prince and the princess stay together forever.

To Do List

1 .Be a better person.
2. Be a better sister.
3. Be good in the school.
4. Get good grades.
5. Be better daughter.
6. Be a good girlfriend.
7. Don't miss the school.
8. Be better in my house.
9. Be better with Ms. George.
10. Graduate from high school.
11. Start a carrier
12. Visit other places
13. Meet different people.
14. Look for new friends.
15. Help people that need help.
16. Get married.
17. Have 3 or 4 kids.
18. Name my kids Linda, Daniel,and Inodoro...
19. Be a good mom.
20. Be a good wife.
21. Be a successful profesionost.
22. Show my kids respect for live.
23. Teach my family the value that life has.
24. Show my family how to love and respect each other.
25. Demonstrate respect, to my kids.
26. Show my kids that money is not for everything.



I want to be a better person because; I know that if I am better person I have more opportunities, of having good friends. I also want to be a good sister because I know that family always goes first and that my family is the most important thing in the world to me. I want to be a better student in my school because I know that if I get good grades I can get a scholarship and I can go to college and in the future get a good job. I want to be good daughter because sometimes I’m not that good with my mom when I’m mad I yelled at her and she gets sad that’s why I want to be a good daughter. And I don’t want to miss the school again because the last year I always came late and all that stuff and I don’t want to be late no more because that can affect my grades.

I want to be better in my house help my mom to clean my house and help her to take care of my brothers when she is not there. I want to make new friends in different parts of the world because when you have friends in different parts of the world too much things are different like you can go to visit them and then you can go around the city and take a look at the city that would be cool. And I also want to help people if they need it because in this world there are too much people that need help from other. Some kids that need food.

When I grow up I want to married with a guy that loves me, that takes cares of me and I want to have 3 kids and take care of them then adopt one. I want to have a big family I want to show respect to them that they need to have respect to other no matter who they are.

That is why I want to be a better person in this life because if you are a better person everybody respects you, and you get a good job and everybody takes you seriously.

I want to be a good girlfriend because in that way my boyfriend be good too and we’ll be together too much time and maybe we’ll married in the future because I love him too much and I think he loves me too and I want to be Forever with him. And being a good person in this world I think I’m going to get all I want and I’m going to be more happy with me and with my family and everybody is going to like me.

This is why I want to be a good person and be good in this world to have better opportunities and be good in my school and with the things that I always do like in my house or with my brother.

Recognizing Propositions

1st time I got 10.
2nd time I got 11.
3rd time I got 15.

Recognizing Nouns

1st time I got 19 right.
2nd time I got 25 right.
3rd time I got 32 right.